ENGLISH RHETORIC.
Paragraph
A paragraph is a division of writing that expresses a single
thought (Babajide, 1996:40). It is an integral unit of composition. It is a
group of sentences, which are unified by their common relation to a general conception
(Kane & Peters, 1966:135).
Types of Paragraph
The introductory
paragraph gives a general overview of the speech.
A major component of this paragraph is thesis statement.
The transitional
paragraph(s) may be one or many. Any paragraph in
between the introduction and the conclusion is called transitional. It constitutes
the body of the speech.
The concluding
paragraph ends the speech. The introductory and concluding
paragraphs are like signature tunes. They should appeal to the audience’s
interests. The introductory paragraph opens the door to the speech while the
concluding paragraph closes it.
Features of a Good Paragraph
A good paragraph must possess the following features
Coherence
Coherence requires that the ideas/sentences in a paragraph must be
arranged logically.
Unity
A good paragraph must have unity of thought and unity of form.
Inclusiveness/Completeness
This feature requires that the paragraph does not leave out any
essential detail. The details here are related to the specific focus of the
paragraph.
Emphasis
Another important feature of a good paragraph is emphasis. This
has to do with the way the content of the paragraph is pursued. For a paragraph
to be emphatic, it has to be seriously pursue its focus.
SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
1. What is a paragraph?
2. List the features of a good paragraph.
3.3 Punctuation Marks; , punctuation marks are those symbols that indicate the manner in
which the voice is adjusted to make communication meaningful. While speaking,
we observe some pauses at some points and adjust the tone of our voices to
achieve different ends. In writing, these processes are indicated by some
marks. The appropriate, or otherwise, use of punctuation marks could affect the
meaning of your speech. This is why it is important for you to master the
various ways these punctuation marks should be used. They are not just marks
meant to adorn your speech. There are specific rules guiding their use.
1. Full stop (.)
The full stop is used for the following purposes.
· To signal the end of a sentence. a. I don’t need
sycophants. b. See all of them. c. I have to go now. d. Take it easy. e. We have seen you.
· To indicate
abbreviation: a. etc. b. Oct. c. e.g. d. a.m. e. p.m.
However, in some of the examples above, particularly c, d, e, full
stop is optional.
· In Internet and email
addresses.
http://www.ui.edu.ng
2. Question Mark (?)
This mark is used in the following ways.
· To indicate the end of
a direct question:
a. What have you prepared? b.
Can we meet tonight? c. Will you
come for the service? d. Is it
ready? e. Do you know what to do?
· To express doubt,
particularly with a date: Obafemi Awolowo (?
1908-1987)
3. Exclamation Mark (!)
It is used at the end of a sentence that shows strong emotion: a.
This is it! b. How wonderful it was!
4. Comma (,)
The comma is used for the following functions.
· To separate words in a
list:
a. I have four friends: Tola, Hannah, Kemi and Jummy. b. The man, his wife and their
children stole the goat. c. Maize,
rice and yam are now scarce. d. Red,
blue, pink and white are my favourite colours. e. One table, two chairs and four stools have been made.
· To separate a tag
question from the other parts of the sentence.
a. She is ready, isn’t she? b.
They didn’t come, did they? c. We
have served them well, haven’t we? d.
She can do it, can’t she? e. You are
loved by her, aren’t you?
· To separate phrase or
clauses:
a. Having redeemed his battered image, he decided to run for the
presidency. b. If you
know the truth, say it. c. Go in, sit
down, and eat your food.
d. If I meet you here again, you’ll be in the soup. e. Because of his carelessness, he lost
the contract.
· To separate long main
clauses linked by a conjunction such as
but, and,
or, for, as. a. We thought all of them would come to receive us, but only their
leader came. b. He
relies only on the people that come to his house, as there is no
one left with him. c.
Do all that is in your power to help others, as there are rewards
for doing so. d. They
controlled the people and their assets kept in their care, but
one day the people revolted. e.
The man and his wife didn’t wait to get the reply, but they
assured us of their willingness to assist us.
· To separate an
introductory expression that applies to the entire
sentence.
a. For now, we can’t accept you. b. Disgraced, he left hurriedly. c. Yes, we can do it!
d. By God’s grace, I will pass this examination. e. As for you, however, I will not
change the rule.
· To separate a
non-defining phrase or clause from the rest of the
sentence: a. The man, who nearly
died because of her, has left her finally.
b. Adewole, our faithful friend, gets married next week. c. The handset, which I actually did
not request for, has been stolen. d.
Chief Alaseju, our governor, has lost the ticket. e. The dog, which is more faithful than some humans, deserves to be honoured.
· To separate short
quotation from the rest of the sentence:
a. The pastor said, “Do your best and leave the rest”. b. He exclaimed, “I have got her”.
c. James declared, “I am more than conqueror”. d. The woman lamented, “He carted away everything”. e. Joseph said, “I will not contest for
that post again”.
· To separate written
conversation from the other parts of the
sentence; it could come
before or after ‘said’ or any reporting
verb: a. “See me immediately,” she shouted. b. “Help them,” requested the man.
c. “Try more,” he said. d.
He inquired, “Where is she?” e. They
pledged, “We shall trace them.”
5. Colon (:)
The colon is used in the following ways.
· To introduce a list of
items.
a. The following people are performing today: Adekanmi, Adekemi,
and Adeyemi. b. She has
four children: Peju, Pelumi, Pemisire, Ponmile.
c. I want to travel to three places: Oluponna, Ikire, and Isoko. d. Adeseke has these virtues: honesty,
sincerity, gentleness and diligence. e.
These are our aims: to help others and to serve God.
· To introduce indented
quotation:
According to Sunday (2011:1403-1404):
In the past, some Nigerian musicians went to any extent to express
their grievances and rivalry. There were reported cases of musicians using
diabolical means (particularly witchcraft) to make the engines and instruments
of the rival musicians to malfunction when they met at occasions. (Some very
rich Nigerians often invite two or more musicians to play simultaneously at
their ceremonies.)
· To introduce a phrase
or clause that gives more information about
the main clause: a. The woman is dejected: she needs a companion. b. We have to go now: it is getting dark. c. Nobody can deceive me any longer: I am wiser now. d. Be careful: humans are dangerous. e. I will succeed: God is on my side.
6. Semicolon (;)
· The semicolon is used
to separate parts of a sentence that already
contains comma:
a. Listen to this: watch, pray and help others; take care of your health;
and eat sleep, and play well. b.
Believe in God; trust no one, if you want peace. c. I am ready; I will help you, as long as I am able. d. Help us, Oh Lord; we need you, even
now. e. The man will not listen to
you; even if you are a prophet, he will snub you.
7. Apostrophe (’)
This mark is used in the following manners:
· To indicate letters or
figures that have been omitted:
i. Can’t (Cannot) ii. She’s (she is/ it is) iii. It’s (it is/ it has) iv. The January of ’77(1977) v. I’m (I am)
· It is used with s to indicate possession:
i. My daughter’s friend. ii.
Saint James’s Church or Saint James’ Church iii. In Jesus’s name/ In Jesus’ name(Notice that this’s may not be
pronounced; that is, the name may also be pronounced as if it does not indicate
possession) iv. The boy’s dress v. Nobody’s problem
· Sometimes, with s to
form the plural of a figure, an abbreviation,
or a letter:
i. in the 1960’s/1960s ii.
His t’s are not clear. iii. Dot your
i’s iv. Cancel all the p’s. v. He is in his early 40’s/40s.
8. Hyphen (-)
It is used in the following ways.
· To form a compound from
a prefix and a proper name:
i. Pro-Jonathan ii.
Anti-Christ iii. Pre-Obasanjo era iv. Pro-Nigeria
· To form a compound from
two or more words:
i. half-hearted ii. open-ended iii. easy-going iv.
hot-tempered v. father-in-law
· To write compound
numbers between 21 and 99 words:
i. thirty-four ii.
forty-four iii. seventy-nine iv. one hundred and sixty-two v. one million, two thousand, five
hundred and eight-one.
· Used after the first
part of a word that is divided between one line
and the next:
We should not be in a hurry to leave this place; so let us be
ready to misconstrue issues.
· To separate a prefix
ending in vowel from a word beginning with
the same vowel:
i. co-ordinate ii.
co-operative iii. pre-eminence iv. de-emphasise
10. Dash (–)
The dash is used for the following purposes.
· It is used to separate
a comment or an afterthought from the rest
of the sentence.
a. Driving carefully – which is a necessary for safety – should not
be taken lightly.
b. I want you – if you care – to listen to this. c. The man – in my own estimation – is
incompetent. d. Serving God – which
I see as a privilege – should not be abused.
e. We shall – in view of his attitude – set up a panel of enquiry.
· It is also used in
informal discourses, instead of a colon or a
semicolon, to show the
summary of what has gone before.
a. Nobody passed – they all failed. b. We have money – we can sponsor you.
c. I got the award today – I am a victor. d. He doesn’t respect anybody – he is arrogant.
e. Carry out a thorough investigation – the initial report may be wrong.
11. Quotation marks (“”/ ‘’)
It is used in the following ways.
· To enclose words and
punctuation in direct speech:
a. “What is your problem?” he asked. b. “If I don’t come, what will happen?” he inquired c. “I won’t do it,” he vowed. d. “I know the way,” he said. e. “I will repent later,” she promised.
· To enclose the titles
of articles, songs, poems, short stories, etc.
a. J.P. Clark’s “Abiku” b.
Wole Soyinka’s “Telephone Conversation” c.
He wrote, “Now is our time.” d. I
like Ebenezer Obey’s “Womanhood.” e. I know “I believe I can fly.”
· To draw attention to a
word being used in a special way:
a. We want our share of the “national cake”.b. He is looking for “orijo.” c.
I know her “source.” d. Seun is not
ready for that “gift” e. Many people
have “caring” leaders.
· To enclose short
quotation and saying:
a. The man said “tough times never last.”b. He assured us that “the sky is not our limit.”
c. I now know that “when the going is good, you will have many
friends.”
11. Dots/ Ellipsis (…)
It is used to indicate omission from a quotation or conversation.
a. …no controversy. b.
Do it if…. c. We honoured them but….
d. She can read it… we are ready
e. Today history is made… our president has confessed to his offences….
12. Slash/Oblique
· This mark is used to
separate alternative words or phrases:
a. You and/or your friend b.
He/she must be cruel. c. Male/Female
d. Present/Absent
e. Yes/No
· To separate the
different elements in Internet and email
addresses:
http://www.google.com
13. Brackets/Parentheses
These are used in the following ways.
i. To separate extra information or a comment from the rest of a
sentence:
a. NTA Ibadan (first television station in Africa) is crying for
attention. b. Cocoa House (the highest building in Ibadan) is a
masterpiece.
c. He feels that Nigerian young politicians (those born after 1960)
are incompetent.
· To enclose numbers or
letters in a text:
The winners are (i) Ademoyewa, (ii) Adeseke and (iii) Adetoke.
· To enclose cross-references.
The law is unambiguous on this (see Section 2.4)
14. Square Brackets ([ ])
(i)This punctuation mark is used to enclose words inserted to make a
quotation grammatically correct:
In [those] areas, watch what you do ….
· It is also used in
referencing to insert authorial intrusion or
additional information.
According to Lucas (2002:119-120),
“Printed materials [books in particular] in libraries are superior
to the
Internet in many ways.”
15. Italics/Underline
i. It is used to indicate emphasis
I will come but you will stay.
· It is also used to
indicate title of books, magazine, newspapers,
films, paintings, operas, etc.
Shakespeare’s Hamlet.
The Guardian., Newswatch, Opera Wonyosi
· It is also employed to
indicate foreign words:
a. He does have skonsko. b.
Ebo are kept there every Friday.
THE SENTENCE
3.1 Def., a sentence is a group of related words that begin with
a capital letter and ends with a full stop. Or A sentence is the highest grammatical
unit of a language. Or, a sentence is the unit of grammar that expresses a
complete thought/idea. It could be a word or a group of words.
Types of Sentence
There are two major approaches to classifying a sentence: form/structure
and function.
3.2.1 Classification Based on
Structure/Form
Sentence classification based on form/structure considers two parameters:
1. Number of clauses 2.
Types of clauses
There are four types of sentence based on structure or form:
Simple Sentence
A simple sentence has a main clause and no subordinate clause. This
means that it has only one finite verb.
Examples:
1. Cocks crow at dawn. 2.
I am not ready for that now. 3. The
man in that room is not committed to thorough scholarship. 4. I have experienced a lot of disappointment in life. 5. The man and his concubines are
waiting for the man of God.
Compound Sentence
A compound sentence consists of at least two main clauses and no subordinate
clause. This implies that it has at least two finite verbs. The clause could be
joined by coordinating conjunction, comma, or semicolon.
Examples:
1. We have fought and won. 2.
Deborah accepted her fault but she did not apologize. 3. Molade peeped, saw them, and screamed. 4. Man proposes; God disposes. 5.
The man has arrived but his wife is yet to come.
Complex Sentence
A complex sentence comprises at least two main clauses and at
least a subordinate clause.
Examples:
1. If you dare me, I will deal with you. 2. Don’t go into marriage unless you are fully prepared.
3. Because she knew her right, she did not succumb to the man’s threat
even though nobody encouraged her. 4.
Appreciate people whenever you have the opportunity.
5. Except you rely on God, your life may be miserable.
Compound-complex sentence
This sentence contains at least a main clause and at least a
subordinate clause. In other words, it is a combination of a compound sentence
and a complex sentence. A simple way of forming a compound-complex sentence is
to add at least a subordinate clause to a compound sentence.
Examples:
1. We entered and sat down although she didn’t expect us. 2. Provided you are serious, I will
come and teach you if you invite me. 3.
I can accept you into the group and groom you for the next competition if you
are ready to cooperate with us.
Classification Based on Function
This parameter considers the communicative role a sentence plays. There
are four types based on this criterion:
Declarative Sentence
A declarative sentence makes a statement of fact, which may be
true or false, in the negative, or in the positive.
Examples:
1. We are all gullible. 2.
Nobody knows tomorrow. 3. We can’t
rely on people like you. 4. All of
us will soon see that you are a sellout. 5.
The teacher is not to blame for his lack-lustre performance.
Imperative sentence
This sentence gives a command, makes an entreaty or a request. It
does not have a covert subject because its subject, which is usually “you,” is often
deleted because it is understood.
Examples:
1. Get out of my sight. 2.
Don’t ever tell me that again. 3.
May God save us from exploiters. 4.
Let’s get out of here immediately. 5.
Never trust a man like him.
Interrogative sentence
This sentence is used for asking questions. It usually ends with a
question mark (?).
Exclamatory Sentence
This sentence expresses the strong feeling of a person. It ends with
an exclamation mark.
Examples:
1. What a beautiful lady you are! 2. How fortunate we are! 3.
What a powerful message it was!
4. How exceptional you were on that day! 5. What a disappointment to this generation she is!
TENSE, ASPECT AND CONCORD
Aspect
Aspect is a grammatical category of verbs that considers the
quality of the action of the verb independent of the tense. Simply put, aspect means
the range of meanings expressed by the verb. In English, aspect is broadly
categorised into progressive and perfective aspects. The progressive aspect
takes the affix ‘ing’, while the perfective aspect takes ‘have’ (or its
derivatives – has and had.
Tense
Tense means the linguistic way of expressing time dimensions. Each
language has its own peculiar way of doing this. There are three main time
dimensions: past, present, and future. English has three
tenses: past, present, and future. However, some scholars have argued that English
does not have future tense. They premise their argument on the fact that English
does not morphologically show the future tense. We will not go into the
argument for or against this view. We will adopt the traditional view that
holds that English has three tenses, because it serves well our intension in
this course. Each of these tenses could be expressed in four different ways: simple,
progressive/continuous, perfect, and perfect progressive.
To realise these different forms, the verb often takes some inflections,
auxiliary verbs, and aspectual markers, as the case may be. Before considering
these tenses in some detail, let us examine “aspect.”
Present Tense
Simple Present Tense
This tense uses the infinitive (without to) form of the verb. If
the subject is third person singular, s, es, and ies are
added, as appropriate. This tense is used to express the following:
· Present habitual action
i. She comes here weekly. ii. They pray every night. iii. He fast weekly. iv.
Deborah sings daily.
v. These people plan evil.
· Present
occurrence/state of being
i. I know Wumi. ii.
The boy is insolent. iii.
Paul and Peter are diligent. iv.
Nike is humble.
v. They seem confused.
· Document literary works, holy books, and constitution.
i. In The Road, Soyinka emphasizes communication. ii. The Bible presents God from
different angles. iii. Our constitution
is defective. iv. This poem has
enjambment. v. The novel makes
a good reading.
· Run commentary
i. Now Okocha is ready to fire a shot. ii. Kanu gets the ball; passes it to Aghowa; Aghowa dribbles
one, dribbles two; aims at the post; oh no, over the bar! iii. The President goes to the
lectern to read his address.
· Future occurrence
i. Lawale gets married next month. ii. The programme begins tomorrow. iii. The spies leave for the place tonight. iv. My examination holds soon. v. Our review end next year.
Present Progressive Tense
This tense uses a present auxiliary verb with the present
participle form of the main verb. It is used to express the following.
· An ongoing action/event
i. We are reading our books. ii. Osarume is waiting for you. iii. Olusayo is writing the memo.
iv. Pelumi and Yetunde are dancing naked. v. Nobody is cooking your food.
· A future occurrence
i. They are going to the altar soon. ii. Our boy is coming back next year. iii. My friend is doing the work tomorrow. iv. We are planting the seeds
next month. v. Juliana is
presenting next.
Present Perfect Tense
The present perfect tense uses the perfective aspectual marker have
(or has) with the past participle form of the verb. This tense is
used to express: An event that has started and has been completed but has not
been overtaken by another event
i. We have done the work. ii. Ogazie has eaten your food. iii. Ozioma has written her dissertation. iv. Chioma and Chuka have not seen
the man. v. This is the first
time that I have come here.
Present Perfect Progressive Tense
This tense is a combination of the present progressive tense and
the present perfect tense. Therefore, it uses have/has + been + past participle
verb to express an event/action that has started and is still in progress as at
the time of speaking/writing.
i. The men have been praying for you. ii. Jumoke has been cooking your food. iii. Samson has been reading the wrong thing. iv. They have been deceiving you.
v. Tolulope has been expecting Temitayo.
Past Tense
Simple Past Tense
This tense uses the past form of the verb to show:
· Past action
i. Joke read the address. ii. Those boys brought the car. iii. They hit the right mark. Iv. Joshua went there. v.
She did the evil
· Past habitual action
i. He used to go there everyday. ii. She often played the guitar. iii. He often did it. iv.
Damilola usually served us. v.
Kate always followed that lady.
· Impossible wish
i. If I were you, I won’t marry her. ii. If I were God, I will kill all evil people. iii. If you were that boy, you wouldn’t
have returned that money. iv. If she
were your daughter, she would have catered for you. v. They will hoard the air, if they controlled life.
Past Progressive Tense
The past progressive tense combines a past auxiliary verb with the
present participle form of the main verb to indicate the following.
· An event/action that
was going on at a particular time in the past
i. He was singing when I saw him. ii. They were shouting when we caught them. iii. As I was reading, they were
planning how to escape. iv.
While she was grinding the pepper, Yomi was washing the pot. v. Nifemi and Abiodun were sweeping the
floor while Tunde and Bidemi were playing.
· Past habitual
action/relationship
i. Sayo and Gbemisola were always reading together
last year. ii. He was always taking
that lady out last month. iii.
Kunle was usually singing that anthem. iv. The boys were always waiting for you there. v. I was always praying for
two hours daily
· Impossible wish
i. If pen were talking yours would have protested. ii. If humans were flying, I
would have got home now. iii. If
doors were crying, that door would have cried uncontrollably
Past Perfect Tense
This tense makes use of had and the past progressive form of
the main verb to express the following.
· Indicate a past action
that took place before another past action
i. No sooner had he gone than I arrived. ii. She had slept before I
prayed. iii. I thought you had
paid her. iv. Nobody had
attempted this before your arrival.v.
When I arrived they had slept.
· Express regret
i. If I had known I would have stayed. ii. Had he come, we would have protected him. iii. If you had been told, you
wouldn’t have left. iv. She would
have not married you if she had known your secret. v. The girls wouldn’t have undressed if they had known you
plan.
Past Perfect Progressive Tense
This tense uses had + been + past participle verb to show an
action/event that had started and was in progress before another past action.
i. They had been singing before they joined our choir. ii. We had been praying here
before you built your church. iii.
They had been packing the belongings before we stopped them. iv. Everybody had been writing the
play before you met them. v.
Similolu had been laughing before you came in.
Future Tense
Future occurrences can be expressed using either the simple
present tense or the present progressive tense, as mentioned earlier. However, by
a combination of will/shall and other auxiliary verbs with the main verb
different future tenses can be derived.
Simple Future Tense
This tense uses will/shall with the main verb to express an
incident or action that is expected to take place in the future.
i. I will not go there. ii. She will meet us. iii.
They shall help us. iv. Dayo will
try that option. v. The boy will
run away.
Future Progressive Tense
This tense employs will/shall and ‘be’ as auxiliary verbs before
the main verb. The tense expresses an event or action that is expected to be
taking place at a given time in the future.
i. I shall be going to Lagos next week ii. She will be addressing the press tomorrow. iii. Tomipe will be completing her
programme next year. iv All of them shall
be waiting for you there.
v. My sister will be getting married next Saturday.
Future Perfect Tense
The future perfect tense deploys shall/ will+have+been as
auxiliary verb before the past participle form of the main verb. It indicates
an event or action that is expected to have been completed at a particular time
in the future.
i. The guilty lawyers will have been derobed by this time
next
month. ii. Yemi shall
have been given the award by 7:30 pm tomorrow. iii. Tofunmi will have been crowned the queen by this time
today. iv. Our lecturer shall
have been appointed by this time next week. v. Those ladies will have been discovered by this time next
year.
Future Perfect Progressive Tense
The future perfect tense deploys shall/ will+have+been as
auxiliary verb before the present participle form of the main verb. It
indicates an action or event that is expected to have started and be in
progress at a given time in the future.
i. Tricia will have been taking her final examination by this
time next month. ii. The students shall
have been clearing your office by 9.00 am tomorrow. iii. We shall have been discussing with the president by
2.00pm next Monday. iv. Funke shall
have been feeding the chicken by this time tomorrow. v. Those boys will have been doing the assignment by this
time on Wednesday.
ASSESSMENT
1. What is tense? 2. What
is aspect? 3. Differentiate between
tense and aspect.
Concord
Concord is the grammatical notion used to denote the agreement
among the components of a sentence.
Subject-Verb Agreement
There are two main types of concord: grammatical concord and
notional concord.
Grammatical Concord
This is the concord that strictly adheres to the principle of the
verb agreeing with the subject.
· A singular subject
takes a singular verb.
i. The leader of the boys is around. ii. She knows me. iii.
Theophilus cares. iv. The man
sings well. v. Bolu fights
a lot.
· A plural subject takes
a plural verb.
i. The minutes have been adopted. ii. We are ready. iii.
Our governors are corrupt. iv.
Many people deceive themselves. v.
We need a good leader.
· A compound subject that
is plural in meaning takes a plural verb.
i. The man and his wife are around. ii. Seun and Sola follow us. iii. The boy and the girl are unserious. iv. That man and his friend control the
children. v. Our teacher and his
daughter play the keyboard.
· Indefinite pronouns
used as subjects take singular verbs.
i. Nobody cares for you. ii.
Everybody sees them. iii.
Something is missing. iv.
Everything is wrong with you. v. Nothing stops you from going
there.
Notional Concord
This is concerned with the idea being expressed; grammatical
markers are set aside in this case.
· “A number --- ” takes a
plural verb.
i. A number of boys are missing. ii. A number of us are insensitive. iii. A number of books were lost last week. iv. A number of magazines are biased.
v. A number of ladies want good
husbands.
But “The number ---”
takes a singular verb.
i. The number of my cars is now twenty-two. ii. The number of his enemies has increased.
iii. The number of our departments has reduced. iv. The number of her grammatical
errors has not decreased. v.
The number of their friends is three.
· “One of ---” takes a
singular verb.
i. One of the ladies is beautiful. ii. One of the men is around. iii. One of the cars has been stolen. iv. One of the eggs is rotten. v. One of the rogues has apologized.
· “One of ---
who/whom/that etc. ---” takes a plural verb after the
relative pronoun and a
singular verb for the main clause.
i. One of the girls who follow him is a Ghanaian. ii. One of the women who respect us
has travelled. iii. One of
the cars which are red belongs to me. iv. One of our sisters who tell stories is in London.
v. One of your friends who believe
in hard work knows you.
· “Many a/an ---” takes a
singular verb.
i. Many a teacher is lazy. ii. Many a politician is corrupt. iii. Many a lady is gullible. iv. Many a pastor is fake. v. Many a driver is incompetent.
· Measurements of time,
weight, capacity take a singular verb, because each measurement is seen as a
unit.
i. Thirty minutes is enough for this exercise. ii. Four litres of petrol was wasted.
iii. Seventy kilogrammes of pork has
been brought. iv. Twelve
kilogrammes of garri is in your cupboard.
v. Thirty-four litres of palm oil is missing
a. A compound subject
that is singular in meaning takes a singular verb.
i. Rice and beans is good for lunch. ii. Bejide and Sons is selling shares. iii. Akinola and Associates is handling the case. iv. Dambaba and Sons helps northerners.
v. Agnes and Co. is ready to
assist us.
b. When “in
collaboration with”, “together with” etc. are used aftera subject, the verb
still agrees
with the subject.
i. The president, in company of his ministers, comes here
today. ii. Our church, in
collaboration with NTA and AIT, organizes a two-day marriage seminar. iii. The man, in company of his
friends, is going to the pastor. iv.
James, alongside the three of us, is planning the reception. v. The pastor, in conjunction with the
media houses in the state, is planning the rally.
c. When a premodifier
is used for a coordinated subject, a singular verb follows.
i. The founder and pastor of the church is too dubious. ii. My friend and confidant knows you.
iii. Her teacher and sponsor hates
her.iv. Your trainer and captain
trusts you.
d. When a correlative
conjunction is used, the subject close to the
main verb dictates the verb to be used.
i. Either the boys or the girl keeps the record. ii. Neither the commissioners nor the
governor has seen this. iii. Neither
Thomas nor his antagonists speak the truth.
SPEECCH
There
are different types of speech. The major ones include:
Expository
Speech
An
expository speech aims at revealing some facts on a concept or personality.
Analytical
Speech
In
an analytical speech, attempt is made to break down a concept or phenomenon
to its component parts and then explain how these parts constitute the
whole. It may involve giving reasons why a particular policy is right or
wrong.
Speech
of Introduction
This
is a speech, which introduces the main speaker to the audience.
Speech
of Presentation
This
is a speech used when, which presenting someone a gift, an award, or some other
form of public recognition (Lucas, 2001:440). In this kind of speech, the focus
is on the personality to be honoured.
Speech
of Acceptance
This
speech shows appreciation for an honour or award or any form of recognition.
Commemorative
Speech/speech of Tribute
It
is a speech written to informs and
inspires, the audience to appreciate the entity being praised.
After-Dinner
Speech
This
is a speech meant to entertain, making a thoughtful point about its subject in
a lighthearted way.
Persuasive
Speech
This
is a speech that attempts to convince others to accept the writer /speaker’s view
of the way things are.
Inspirational
Speech
This
is a speech, which tries to stimulate listeners to a high level of feeling or
activity.
3.2 Ethics of Speechwriting/Speechmaking
Each
profession is backed up by ethics. Speech writing/making is guided by the
following ethics as identified by Powers (1993:72):
1.
No one should knowingly promote something as true that they honestly believe to
be fake
2.
No one should suggest a greater degree of certainty about their beliefs than
their evidence will actually support.
3. No one should misuse the available facts to
support their cause.
4.
No one should withhold information that might be relevant to the issue under
discussion.
5.
No one should distort information to make it conform to his or her own
position.
These
are the ethics guiding each occasion for which the speech is meant. Each
gathering has what it permits and what it forbids. Therefore, a speechwriter
should take note of these too, as they could determine the reception of his/her
speech.
ASSESSMENT
EXERCISE
List the types of speech discussed
so far. 1. Discuss the relevance of the ethics of speech writing to a
speechwriter. 2. Explain the features of four types of speech. 3. What are the
steps a speechwriter needs to take to make a speech of introduction effective?
4. List the ethics of speech writing a writer must take note of.
AUDIENCE ANALYSIS
The Audience; The audience is
the receiver or target of a particular speech. You may wonder why some
seemingly fantastic speeches and some eloquent speakers fail to make impressive
impact on their audience.
Audience-Centeredness;Any
speaker/writer that has little or no regard for the audience is both fail in
his/her speech Endeavour. A good speechwriter must beaudience-centred. This
means that such a writer keeps the
audience foremost in his/her mind at every stage of the speech preparation and presentation.
Such a writer asks himself/herself the following basic questions.· To
whom am I writing/speaking? · What
do I want them to know, believe, or do because of my speech? · What is the most effective way of writing
and presenting my speech to accomplish this aim? · What is my audience’s relevant
demographic involvement? · What
are my audience’s social involvements? · What
are my audience’s relevant topical involvements? (Powers, 1993:61)
3.3 Issues in Audience Analysis
Audience
analysis is “the process of examining about the expected listeners of a
speech.” (Beebee & Beebee, 1994:64).: You select what you are going to
say and how
you
are going to say it based on your best evaluation of your audience’s prior
constructions concerning the topic (Powers, 1993:59).
There are two basic manners of
audience analysis: spontaneous and
self-conscious.
The former involves focusing on “what is unique about the other person as an
individual.” The latter focuses on what is common to the audience members as a
group (Powers, 1993:59).
Types of Audience Analysis
The
different pieces of information needed about the audience could be grouped
under the following types of audience analysis:
Demographic
Analysis
Demography
refers to information relating to the biodata of an individual or a group of
people. Demographic analysis of the audience, therefore, concerns seeking
information about age, religion, gender, educational background ethnic
background, and cultural background,
among
others, of the audience.
Age
This
presupposes that there is direct relationship between age and experience. Once
the age of the audience is known, the writer can convenientlychoose the most
appropriate topic and the best approach to use in presenting it.
Gender
It deals with how the society assigns roles to individuals based on their
sexes. This varies from one culture to another. Besides, there is now a shift
in professional demarcations. Some jobs once seen as exclusive preserves of men
are now being undertaken by women. In doing audience gender analysis, it
is important to ascertain the ratio of males to females. Generally, take note
of the following points:
· Avoid making sweeping judgements
based on gender stereotypes.
· Ensure that your speech relates to
both genders.· Avoid
jokes and other tactics, which are derogatory to either gender.· In your illustrations and stories,
do not cast either gender in
stereotypical roles.· Take care of the similarities and
differences between the two
sexes.· Avoid sexist language.· Do not cast aspersion on some
seemingly deviant groups, such as gays, lesbians, and shemales. (cf. Beebee
& Beebee, 1994:67-68; Lucas 2001:104).
Ethnic, Racial and Cultural Backgrounds
Each
ethnic group, race and culture has its own unique features, although there are
some features, which cut across all of them. A good writer should find out the
ethnic, racial and cultural peculiarities of the segments of the audience. This
will help him/her to know how not to say what will put off a particular ethnic
group.
Religion
Currently,
religion is one of the most divisive factors all over the world. It is so
powerful that, on a slight provocation on religious issues, whether wittingly
or unwittingly done, some religious bigots are ready to foment trouble. There
is mutual suspicion among the various religious sects. Since a writer belongs
to or is endeared to a particular religion,he/she needs to exercise caution so
that he/she will not be seen as unduly religious in his/her speech. The
audience is seldom
homogeneous.
Even among the same religion, there are different denominations or sects.
Group
Membership
Members
of the audience may belong to some groups that have certain values they
cherish. Such groups may be social, professional or voluntary. The group
affiliation of the audience may inform the writer on what to emphasise, what to
de-emphasise, and what not to mention at all.
Other
Demographic Variables
Apart
from the demographic variables discussed above, there are some other ones that
could shape the speech and its reception. They include academic
qualification, social status, economic position, marital status and intelligence.
How
to Gather Demographic Information
There
are both formal and informal ways of gathering demographic information about
the audience. The informal way entails simply observing them and asking
information about them.
The
formal method of gathering demographic information deploys mainly
questionnaire. This questionnaire should be brief but it must address what you
need. It should be administered before you begin to write the speech. Below is
a sample:
Name:
(optional)______Sex: Male Female Age:________Educational qualification__________Occupation:______Marital
status________State of origin __________Language(s) spoken:_______Nationality:____________Religion:_____
The
two methods should be used because where one is inadequate, the other will
complement it. The information gathered should be taken as a means to an end.
This is because “inferences based on generalized information may lead to faulty
conclusions
ASSESSMENT
1. What is audience? 2. Define
audience-centredness. 3. Mention some of the things to note in demographic
audience analysis.
Psychological
Audience Analysis
The
audiences have different frames of mind because they are made up of people from
different worlds of experience. This manifests in their disposition to a topic
and to a speaker/writer. What interests A may not interest B; one man’s food is
another man’s poison. To understand the psychology of the audience, Gregory
(2002:82) suggestsassessing the audience’s level of;
Interest
Level
In
order to avoid making your speech boring to the audience, the following steps
should be taken.
(i)
Assess the interest of the audience in your topic: An
average human being pays attention to topics that are of interest to him/her.
(ii)
Maintain interest throughout the speech: You can maintain
the interest of the audience by using examples.
(iii)
Create interest: One of the best ways to do this is to
relate the topic to the needs and desires of the audience.
Needs
and Desires
A
good speech should try to meet the needs. Topics that treat reaching peak of
one’s career address self-actualisation needs. “The more needs and desires you
can help listeners satisfy, the stronger your speech” (Gregory, 2002:85). Generally,
audiences are interested in the following, as stated by Powers (1993:68): · What
other people are doing and how they live their lives · Things that improve their
competence · Things
that give them a greater appreciation of commonplacethings in their world,
particular new insights into their everyday
World · The unusual and the extraordinary,
such as adventure tales, you can include the mysterious, strange or unusual
about your topic · Something
now.
Attitudes
An attitude focuses on an individual’s like or dislikes;
a belief is “the way an individual structures reality to determine what is true
and false”; while value refers to “enduring concepts of good and bad, right and
wrong”.
Attitude
towards the Writer/Speaker
The
reader/writer may have either a positive or a negative attitude toward the
writer/speaker. Each attitude is informed by different reasons, such as:
· Previous knowledge of the writer/speaker: The
audience based on what they have heard or read about the writer/speaker forms some
biases. If a speaker/writer is known for using difficult language, the audience
may lose interest in his speech. Conversely, a writer or speaker that has been
known to always make his/her audience feel at home is likely going to have the
attention
of the audience.
· The name of the writer/speaker: Some
people have some stereotypes on some names. Certain names are easily identified
with some tribes, religions, and ideologies. Without having had any previous
contact with the writer/speaker, some people would have already formed some
attitudes on the writer/speaker based on this criterion.
· Spontaneous and unwarranted views: Some
people justdevelop some attitudes, love or hate, toward people without any particular
obvious reasons
· Appearance: This affects only
speakers. The way the speaker appears during speech presentation may influence
the attitude of the audience.
Attitude
toward the Goal
There
are three main attitudes toward the goal: favourable, unfavourable and
neutral. An audience’s positive attitude toward you as a speaker can
overcome negative or apathetic attitudes they may have toward your topic or
purposes.
Attitude toward the occasion
Each
occasion has some expectations attached to it. If the audience expects to hear
motivational speech but they are given a sermon, they will be disappointed.
This affects their attitude toward the speaker.
ASSESSMENT
1. Mention the forms attitude could
take in relation to speech. 2. Define attitude.
3. What are the three major points
to consider while doing psychological audience analysis?
3.3 Environmental/Situational Analysis
Environmental/situational
audience analysis refers to that analysis which “focuses on situational factors
such as the size of the audience, the physical setting for the speech, and the
disposition of the audience toward the topic, the speaker, and the occasion.”
This implies that this analysis also involves doing some attitudinal analysis.
Size
You
need to have some idea of the size of your audience. If the audience is
expected to be 1000 people but you have 100 people in mind, in the case of
delivery, you might be thrown off balance initially because the kind of mind
frame needed for each audience differs. Even in writing, the size of the
audience could influence the choice of the linguistic items and visual aids to
be used.
Time
limit
It
is not common to find speakers who keep to the time scheduled for a speech.
Some speakers elongate their speeches unnecessarily. As much as possible, get
information on the time allotted to your speech. Make attempt not to exceed the
time limit. There is even greater reward in
finishing
your speech before the specified time. In some situations, you may have to
adjust your speech to suit the prevalent situation.
Physical
Setting
This
also affects only the delivery aspect of the written speech. You need to check
the sitting arrangements and the position of the lectern for you to be sure
that your audience can see you
properly.
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